As on of our Must dos in Class we have to do a novel Study and Then Do activity after we Have read our Book (if you Would like to See More Click Here)And One of the activities is to Write a poem Here We practised doing them
Stars
Blue,Bright
Floating,Glowing,Ziping
Sky,tane mahuta,legends,Relatives
Crying,Shining,flying
Gleaming,living
Matariki
Hi Toby i like how you added a link maybe next time you could tell us how to make one other than that good post
ReplyDeleteBYE NOAH (:
Hi Noah
DeleteThanks For Commenting on My blog I don't get many Comments Because My name is not on Blog Central Next Time I will try and do that for you Maybe Next Time I Will Teach you How to
do a proper long Comment other From that Nice Comment
Make sure to keep Checking out my Blogs
Toby
ok (:
DeleteHi Toby!
ReplyDeleteGreat Blog Post! I like how you added a picture of your diamond poem. I also like how you added a link, and what you did! Next time you could maybe check for punctuation, and proof read it.Other than that, great post!!
Lily
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ReplyDeletehi Toby its Daniel tr
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a link for more info.
but maybe next time you could add more information on the blog of the poem
Hi Toby,
ReplyDeleteInteresting post I like how your Matariki poem had a lot of detail in it.
But the link did not work.
Great post!
Thank you sev
DeleteI like how you started with a positive thing and then a helpful thing I will make sure that I fix that link it was supposed to take you to my novel study page
Toby
hello Liam interesting poem i like the poem. you will need to check you grammar because some of the sentences didn't make sense any way goodbye
ReplyDeletei said hello liam but was supposed to say hello toby
DeleteHi Toby
ReplyDeleteNice blog post I really liked your use of words and I don't know keep up the good work!
Kind regards
Jordan
HI toby,
ReplyDeleteI like that you added a link in your post but maybe next time put a learning intention.