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These holidays I went up to matakana With My Mum, Brother's, Auntie,Cousin and Grandad We were Staying on a farm In a little Cottage .
The little Cottage Had Seven bed's For all of us To sleep in. Me My brother's and My Cousin All slept In a loft Which is really cool and We had like a fold down ladder. I Think I enjoyed matakana the most .
In the holiday's I also Played A game with my
Brother's on Our lawn I had a lot of Fun I also Went to jump with some of my Friend's and then we Went out to Genghis khan for lunch Which was really yummy.
Hi Toby! Great post! I love how you added lots of information about your holiday! I also like how you added the date. Next time you could maybe add a picture. Other than that, fantastic post, Toby!
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ReplyDeleteHi Toby
ReplyDeleteYour holiday sounds fun but next time you should put the LI and also put some photos in your blog.
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ReplyDeleteHi Toby
ReplyDeleteI liked how you told us about your fun holiday. I also thought how you went to Genghis khan, my favourite meal from Genghis is pasta and marinated beef with chips and buffet rolls.
-Jordan
Hi Toby
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post. I like how you added pargrafs.
Maybe next time you could added the LI.
Kind regards Tarli